answer:The essay is pretty good for the most part. It looks like you put some work into it. There are just a few glaring errors. First paragraph: In the first sentence, instead of saying “wanted to go to a party”, just say “went to a party” In the next sentence, replace, “recognised” with “realized”. Drop the comma after nobody. Second paragraph: “ten minutes by car” needs to be replaced. You could say something like, “After we rode for around ten minutes in the car”. Put a comma after “car”. “clashed with” is not what you want to say. Replace it with “crashed into” Last paragraph: Drop the comma after “me” in the second sentence. Replace “will be okay” with “would be okay”. Start the last sentence as, “From this experience I learned never to drive”